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Abel : Here you have the second chapter!
Seth : All of it in a PDF.
Cain : All you have to do is to click or drag the corner of each page to look back or forward through the comic.


Chapter I:pointr:triple-e-comic.deviantart.com/…
Chapter III:pointr:triple-e-comic.deviantart.com/…
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You're art is getting better; and you seem to be bringing in more of the story...something we didn't see much of in Chapter 1. I also like that you're bringing color in; but I don't think you should do a page or two of full color and return back to black and white. However, I encourage you to use partial color, that really brought a sense of urgency to the scenes in which it was used.
The only big negative I'm going to bring up is language. Please, please proofread what they are saying, unless it's no mistake that they talk off-kilter to normal people. Either way, it's distracting and detracts from the story. In all fairness, that only became an issue in the last five pages.

I can't wait to see what comes next.
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In comparison to chapter 1, the addition of more colour is definitely an improvement. I would say that the mainly black and white background, with splashes of colour is more attractive and in keeping with the style you're currently using within the comic.
The artwork itself is also notably shifting, you seem to have more confidence in your drawings of Cain and Abel, and their facial expressions are interesting but not overt.
The introduction of the new characters as the story continues, I feel, keeps your story all the more fresh.
My one critique would be that Seth looks a bit too similar to Abel. It would have been more intriguing for all three hell brothers to look differently, as any development in the physical relationship between Cain and Seth, would insinuate that Cain is unconsciously attracted to Abel, which I don't think is the direction you were going for.

(Also thank-you for throwing the llama, or I wouldn't have found your amazing page) :) x x x
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RealNiggaBlackJack Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm... Abel is the cutest and most attractive thing ever in glasses and I'm shipping Seth and Cain :P
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triple-E-comic Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : *blushes* T-thank you!
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RealNiggaBlackJack Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
o///o why are you SO cute OH MY GOD?
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pikadiana Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
huhuhu abel is the cutest thing ever >.<
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triple-E-comic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : *blushes* Thank you..
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pikadiana Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
huhuhu i'll kidnap you later
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SlashAnimateYUS Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
So Cain is a prickly pear, lol and Abel is adorable Big Fool Emoji-28 (High Five YES) [V4] I love that the comic is predominantly black and white with just hints of colors. I can't wait to see where the plot is going, like.....demons? What's their deal....hmmm.....
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triple-E-comic Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Abel : We are happy to hear your feedback and the fact that you enjoyed it!
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SlashAnimateYUS Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
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AcrylicHeart Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
I really enjoy the randomized splashes of color. Your pallet is a bit pastel, but it does seem to work in this case. Further character development was nice, and the addition of a new individual, Seth, was a nice touch. His character design offsets both Cain and Abel's nicely, and brings the group full circle. Also, he's a little shit. xD I love the way you turned Aaron around to be an actual nice guy rather than the punk we saw in the beginning. I was really pleased by that. ^^ (I also enjoyed seeing him in that tanktop. Keheh.) Once again looking forward to more!
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